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The Salt Road · 3 · The Ferry

3 · The Ferry

The ferry left at six whether or not anyone was on it. Mara was. She sat on the bench by the rail with her bag between her feet and watched the harbour lights go out one at a time.

An old man came and stood beside her, in a coat too heavy for the season, leaning on a stick he did not seem to need. “You’re Tamsin’s girl,” he said, and she had not told him her name.

He smelled of rain and of something older, like the inside of a church. Mara moved her bag to her other side.

The water was very dark and the sky was very dark and she felt very alone. Behind them the town had become a line of smoke, and then not even that.

Chapters3 · The Ferry

62% keep23% revisit15% rework

An old man came and stood beside her, in a coat too heavy for the season, leaning on a stick he did not seem to need. “You’re Tamsin’s girl,” he said, and she had not told him her name.

He smelled of rain and of something older, like the inside of a church. Mara moved her bag to her other side.

The water was very dark and the sky was very dark and she felt very alone. Behind them the town had become a line of smoke, and then not even that.

The old man began to hum, low, something she almost knew.

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The Salt Road · Notes

All 5Characters 2Arcs 1Canon 2

CanonNew

The wardens

Grey oilskins, stiff with salt. Whistles on cords they never use. They never speak first, until one says Mara’s name in chapter 4.

“on cords they never used”2

#harbour #authority

Character

Tamsin

Mara’s mother. Never on the page, only in what others say of her. Left the harbour the winter Mara was born.

“You have her way of standing”3

#family

Arc

Mara, finding Tamsin

Leaves the harbour to learn who her mother was. Crosses on the ferry in 3, reaches the island in 5.

“Nobody here will tell you”1

#main

Character

The old man

Smells of rain and old churches. Knows Mara’s name before she gives it. Knew her mother.

“like the inside of a church”3

#ferry

Canon

True names

A true name said aloud gives a hold on its owner. Mara has never been told hers.

“Never say it over water”2

#magic #rules

AgentNotes

All 5Characters 2Arcs 1Canon 2

CanonNew

The wardens

Grey oilskins, stiff with salt. Whistles on cords they never use. They never speak first.

#harbour #authority

Character

Tamsin

Mara’s mother. Never on the page, only in what others say of her.

#family

Arc

Mara, finding Tamsin

Leaves the harbour to learn who her mother was.

#main

Character

The old man

Smells of rain and old churches. Knows Mara’s name before she gives it.

#ferry

Canon

True names

A true name said aloud gives a hold on its owner.

#magic #rules

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